Pitch feedback

-Presented well, confident, good preparation
-Good use of powerpoint
-Good audience research into what people want

-Would have been good to have a title in mind
-Must avoid becoming a copy of 'Sin City'
-Don't overcomplicate

I didn't expect this sort of feeback at all. I prepared the pitch content at the last minute the night before, so i consider this a pretty fair achievement. I was rated within 'the top 3 pitches' out of the whole class. I'll take into account the fact that making the sequence too similar to 'Sin City' will ruin the originilaty, but to be fair, i don't have a green screen and a juicy sum of money to splash out, so that's a start.